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Ver 04 Resolved Steve Konish’s comments Section 4 separates the discussion for delay for each point-of-view. Section 3 (Loss) would benefit from the same organization – synopsis at beginning and end. New sub-sections to help with this. What do you mean when saying the processing "forks" in this context: section 4.1.1 and again in section 4.3. think “forks in the road” – no eating utensils in the text now (4.3) ... where subsequent processing depends on whether the packet arrives or times-out,… Other editorial comments They all help, thanks! |